Thursday, November 17, 2011
CNF; Fearless
Without fear; Bold or brave; intrepid. For me fearless means scared of nothing, you let nothing stop you, you are not afraid of failure, or afraid of anything really. You always try new things, you don't not do something because of fear. Not afraid of death or love, not afraid of denial or acceptance, your not worried; you are secure in yourself, and with yourself. Fear is something that I believe that everyone has, I believe that everyone is afraid of something if you are afraid of something, of you are afraid of nothing you are a hero. Everyone is afraid of different things, that what makes everyone different. Some are afraid of death, and the ones who aren't do jobs where they risk their lives everyday. People who are afraid of reptiles or spiders are not going to work with them. People work around their fears , usually people dot want to face their. I am fearfull of being hurt and being accepted, I am fearfull to trust; nobody is fearless, unless they have faced all of their fears multiple times, and have leaned they are not fears at all. Why are we so fearfull? Why are so few genuinely fearless? What are you afraid of?
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great piece. i love how you asked questions at the end that actually make the reader think. i am also afraid of acceptance.
ReplyDeleteYour style of writing is pretty cool- it flows like a stream of consciousness. I think using the definition of "fearless" as your opening line added strength to the piece.
ReplyDeleteTo improve your writing, you could break the essay into multiple paragraphs. You should also edit a few repetitive phrases and sentences, such as, "Fear is something that I believe that everyone has, I believe that everyone is afraid of something if you are afraid of something, of you are afraid of nothing you are a hero. "
Good job! Thanks for sharing! :)